this had a nice topic, not a new one, but you did it well. You need to work on flow because you lost me more than once, and your syllables were way off.

so you closed your eyes and pointed at a map,
"here's the target."//

dope line. I couldn't see how trying to change the religion was hypocritical, I can see how it's wrong, but hypocracy doesn't seem to fit the action.
Nice drop, check out my piece(the link is in my sig)
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