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Old 05-13-03, 07:18 PM   #19
Tha Linez Drawn
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Nice job dun...even confused me for a second...these my fav lines:

i praise and pray that my metallic arteries will somehow flush my system out/
pumps blood thats brown, stained and drowned in pain/
in shrouds i reign, mourning the loss my own soul processed and resurrected/
infected by retrospective, collective thoughts set forth defective

looks like repentence...nice job
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