with the heart of swine/that bit's not good
heads thru merry-go-rounds/tis wasnt funny

Im torn runnin toward shunned dreams/
Until my breathin contorts and asthma makes lungs cling/good
Ima get felt like an adrenaline rush/
Air melts my spit is burnin the heat off ya Dutch/good
And dick-heads lay down cause I’m fuckin they head up/alrite

yo rhymes improved thru that piece started off pretty wack ended up alrite....tis was ok.......the vocab at the end was a lot better then the start, and some of ur lines were too small......is that contructive enough


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