no doubt trill had it on this one,the seond verse upped majorily over the first i thought,and maybe look at evenin gout the flow,but i liked the indy 500 line it was clever....and yer,posting 4 threads in one day,thatll get you slept on,maybe combine what you wrote osmehow and put it in one?or just post one a day` or osmehting nahmena....anyways,keep posting,you got nice vocab dun....

bismillah