my bad ive been busy,but yer i jsut read this,maybe thats why im so fuckin stupid,coz i cant do math...i cant even add letters with more then one digit with out confusing myself ahhaha....i liked it the whole way through trill,nice multis and shit throught,liked the pyramid lines at the start and the evil sub concious knockin mc`s unconcious line,that made me laugh....i thought maybe the flow feel off a couple of times,you had a long sentences there with the pyramid shit,and then a small one about the point of it and the mentality anhmean....happened a couple of times,but i mean alot of the mc`s in australia do that ive noticed,coz their flow is slower then some mcs in different countries nahmean,maybe tis jsut your style...anywya i liked it trill,

And escalate the length, of the thread of my life span,
Lyrical heat changing emcee’s colors like a sun tan

^^^ i liked those bars dun...

keep uppin,fuck the sleepers....