yer thi swas simplistic,but i think thats your style...a multi or two wouldnt hurt nahmean,i liked reading it,but the topic has been done to death nahmean...try find somethign else to rhyme about,you got a good talent in it you coud do ome ill shit if you ge thte right topics fo ryou nahmean....but keep posting i did enjoy this no doubt.....i liked the ending...

peep my spit zions missy...

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