i think it flowed ight to the beat. the hook was defintly off beat.
maybe if you slowed down the hooks lyrics a lil.. it wuld of flowed better.

the lyrics were tight. for a rough draft, this shit was hot.

the second verse was defintly off beat... but the lyircs held you up.

overall nice drop.

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