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Old 05-14-03, 07:24 PM   #8
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sweet jesus tapdancing christ this was amazing. Nice twist at the end, though evolve's verse ruined the ending of Mentill's for me.
You both had dope wordplay and multis, and flow that was unmistakeable. This was a good piece because everbody writes about love in terms of humans, but your entire collab personified writing. Beautiful concept.

Evolve's best lines:
im mean this, we had something the i considered special
the moon had no room if it wasnt starring you, so celestial

thats the picture, any way you paint it... the true colors
in the end we're barely just friends, we are through lovers

found you 21 years after my birth, can't give up without a fight
i see you every time i look, even with eyes closed.. you are my sight

Mentill's best lines:
You were tha one tha opened my eyes to tha world, Truly
Tha 1st 1 that made me skip tha features and look 4 inner beauty

Seems like U were gunnin', Aimin' straight 4 my heart, But U tried to play it cool
I should of known from tha start that it was a trick, But I was afraid to say it, fool

Made me feel lower than dirt, But eventually U said U'd come back to help me escape tha fate
That I was given without U, I told everyone about U, Oh by tha way my luv's name was PaperMate

Dope work, both of you.
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