aight here goes some comments on this....
dunnon if other cat is no showing or not but anyhow,....

here it is
strong opener however the next line just kinda fell apart

same way with much of this verse... mind you it was a good drop but you're capable of better
gotta work on tying things together with a consistent flow

when i asked if stupidity runs in your genes.......smokey quoted me Levi's/
in bitch slapped i should have stated in the rules no herbs need apply/

pry my fav. bar right there

like I said should be god enough for a win but not your best