nice drop 'Webster', lol you had some killer vocab and stayed on point throughout with many multis. understatement may not have liked the squigglies but it was good that you put them or else some cats might have mistaken the flow of it. it sorta reminded me of the verses in 'who we be' (by dmx) dunno if thats what you where goin for but it came to mind while i was readin it

suggestion: instead of squiggles try using commas, that way the reader will still pause. or you can just use periods to space it out ...... like dat. just my 2 cents (you can thank me later understatement) lol

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