Atra Ludio or Hip-Hop?
From: Cottage Grove, Oregon |
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Neit Night... hahahaha ah.. uh.. nevermind. Sorry. Bad joke... in fact... real bad joke. Worse than my usual bad jokes.
Anyway, about the peice you wrote. Amazing. Seriously. It's like when you care about somebody so much and you just wish you were there and if you think about them and remember them hard enough you can almost get that same feeling you have when your actually with that person. But it's like no matter how much brain power you got real memorys aint nothing compared to the real thing of being with that person you want to be with. And you seriously know how that feels and you seriously know how to write it down.
Just one small problem with your poem... I don't have blue eyes.
~Shalom~
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