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Old 05-15-03, 09:25 PM   #4
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I think this is a cool subject to write about cause I'm sure everyone wonders what it'd be like to fly around and look at everything they know from a different view. This could have been wrote better though, in my humble opinion.

"Wherever I laid my Bangsta nest would be my home/
Bangsta=Bird Gangsta
Some people prey, but I'd just pray I wouldn't get preyed,/
Someone might him me with two bb's and I might get sprayed/
I'd also hate to be a pet, bored, trapped, and worst Caged/"

That part there is where I lost interest in it. The title of this poem and those parts didn't really fit together well.

I don't want to keep this whole response negative so what I did enjoy about it was that it sounded like it came from your heart. It's always good to read something like that so keep on posting them up here.
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