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Old 05-16-03, 08:01 AM   #5
TriX
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Time to Trick

TriX enters*

Takes the mic*
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Did you forget to do your mic cheak?, because it ran out of batteries::
*Constant* couldnt stay *Constant* not even if in his wildest
fantasies::
I had to intervene with his flow, thats why it was 14 lines..to slow
dawg you need to elevate you know what that means? GROW!
This is a NEW.BEE.SCHOOL.LESSON, for you have sinned, with those pre-school lyrics...you must enter confession.
Im a lyrical critisizer, you couldnt fix any of this dudes shyt, not even with a sinthisizer*
Im gonna use the ~distributive~ property, and distribute Losses, the rhymes I spit are flawless.
They need to eradicate this dude from rap battles, He has "RISE"D
To a test the could never be passed, 3 to many balls, you cant even make the ~SeX in the CiTy~ cast.
My rhymes are vast, inhumane lyricist recking the stage, I can see his mom now yelling at him in an angry RAGE...

WHY YOU LOSE?