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Old 05-16-03, 10:21 AM   #20
MeNTiLL
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This battle was nice as shit...Both of ya'll came nicely...But tha only thing I didn't like was havin' to keep clickin' tha links Rise had in his verse...That got borin' and took a little away from tha effect of his verse...Now I see why I lost my battle when I had links in it...It's annoyin' to keep goin' back and forth...BUt anyway heres a breakdown...

RISE:

A.I??...yep I counted, its 76Herbs(76ers)...bitch yall Arent-Deadly....Yall-Mild::.
So I'm proceeding to "Rip Apart This lil Pussy", like the birth of R.Kellys-Love-Child::.
.....Tha first part of this was wack...But tha second part was nice...Could worded it betta woulda been dope...

"Chess, against Animal M.D's" is the Only time that you should "Play-with-a-Vet"::.
Go ahead, do 50 lines,my 20 still will make a Killing off ya 50, like I'm the Slim-Shady of Text::.
.....Tha set-up was kinda played but tha second part was dope as shit...Nice wordplay....

Cause Evolve is "Running Off Track", like He just Pulled a "Train Crime"::
His "Broken Bars" wont have HipHop Buzzing, if he went to jail, escaped and Saved Shyne::
.....Both parts of this was nice...Tha second coulda been worded better but it was still dope...

He wont do "Big things" if he had a "Dick Pump", Confessing-his-Mind-State::.
Obviously, he never seen, who he's Messing with, like a Contestant-on-Blind-Date::.
....That was dopeness right there...Tha second part was funny as shit...

Overall Rise had a nice verse...Tha links was annoyin...But it was still a nice verse...At sum points it seemed tha flow fell off tho...That took away from tha verse too...

Evolve:

^^first line speaks for its self, DONT DO DRUGS!!!.. its bad for your Health^^//
.....LMAO...Comedy like a muthafucca...Dope shit...

Truth or Dare?? Truth... you aren't as nice as your think you might be
Dare.. you already look like you're on Dope, so I Dare you to Bite Me!!//
Flyweight Match & im taking you lightly, mad cause I Am what you thought you might be
a NICE MC, but your NOT.. so the best you can do, is just Lose Politely//
.....This whole part was dope as shit...Tha truth/dare breakdown was highly ill...Tha wordplay was dope as shit too...

Well first off, get out of W.E.C trying to teach newbies & listen to your own clinics
cause any good MC knows you shouldn't use Quotes, Links, Bold Tricks & Gimmicks//
What Is This?? sounds like Kindergarden Business... he must be jus Kidding around
but its no Joke when i let my Children treat your mom's Mouth like a Playground//
Rise, then bow down.. please pay attention and learn.. then you Might win
maybe you'll actually earn some respect.. NEVERMIND, he still highlights his multi's w/ Hy-phens//LOL
.....These bars were straight fire and comedy too...Nicely worded and consistent...Good shit....

trust me, those braids are crusty... you shoud be ashamed, you are hardly a dred
fuck it im out... someone tell this Rasta Imposta that Bob Marley is Dead!!//
....This juss killed tha battle...When I read tha last line it juss murda'd tha whole battle...It was dope and funny as shit...

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Evolve gets my vote in this battle becuz I felt he was more consitstent wit his verse and his shit practically had me craccin' up tha whole way thru tha verse...

Vote = Evolve
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