hey yo, even if its wack can i get some feedback?

gimmie the mic, go get it for me//
startin fresh from the labratory//
on the skill ladder im high, try and floor me//
dogg you'll fail, jabroni's cant ignore me//
so surely someone will respond, amatuers come and gone//
but this Oz emcee is young and shone before he pressed an album//
look at the battle lines, go count em//
from your mind i remove the doubt element//
for critics and haters, just test this talent//
im new, fresh from the gutter, the street//
look at the steam, its the heat from my beat//
a pissed of expriement, results i spit vicous//
gnawin up your words, taste delicous//
make you feed yourself to the fishes//
dont understand? come for a quick ride//
at the end you'll wanna commit suicide//
make you wish you were ready to die//
dont think im all threats and lie//
believe that and your on your back//
6 feet deep after the church quior rap//
you wont know the #1 position//
i dont want it, preventing you is my mission//
my personal primary objective//
eistien said "its all relative"//
but i cant relate to being a loser native//
as a rapper, emcee, you is shameful//