damn this was nice one of the best that i have read lyrcis, vocab, imagry, wordplay. everything was on point. this deserves to be in RB legends.

the populace and spit em out at an alarming rate,all in the name of the first inntiate,the creator//
casting spells on the slave labourers brainwashed into thinkin they gettin credit for makin vapours//
toil till they die,all the while whistlin an grinnin,from now back,back to the futile beginin//

^^^i like this part, it original it had a real message and it flowed nice.

and the whole 2nd verse has to many nice lines to quote.

this was nice keep elevating theres always room for improvement.