you have to elevate alot dunkeep postin drops but youll get it eventually good to see another australia gettin the feel for th ehip hop culture,shits good to see,wher eyou at in australia anyway dun?....i suggest you focus on vocab building and wordplay and imagery also...if you keeppracticing and writing and yeah,alot of practice,youll be aiight...

a pissed of expriement, results i spit vicous//
gnawin up your words, taste delicous

^^ i can already hear you say this,its real australian style lyrics,not wha tim into but still,each to his own i gues...just keep at it and youll elevate dun...

bismillah


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