it was ok..simple but i spoke about tha tin my last post ,on your last post....a word of advice,the use of the word fuck,motherfucker,and fucking sometimes go with what your saying,they are words used to express emotion ,and should be used only as a last resort,try to thnk of osmethign other then these words,unless you find it completly necesary...you will find alot of cats will thikn your lazy for using words liek that n you rrhymes...liek you rusign themt o fill gaps,and you havent put you rmind to the rhyme long enough to thin of something ele,do you get me??...i hope you do...th ejaws droppin tot he fuckin floor was an example,so many other words mightve been used to exprss that they beleive you are a pretty girl and fall head over heels when they see you...i hope you understand...it was a good rhyme,a decent effort,but it lacked work...if you work hard on you rhymes youll gain props respect form all corners,and become a better person and lyricist.....all this said....if you want to do a gangsta style its up to you entirely...but,i woul drecommend trying new things...hip hop is elevation...get back at me..

bismillah



lucious<<thats a good word to use...the best word in the entire peice missy....keep at it.