...yes and this is an example of wht the game'is' an dhow it 'works'....please....if you cant accept criticism dont post....you honestly think you had this verse down tight,sure you might sell,but who gives a fuck about tha...hip hop is elevation...wich you need alot of....if its ill on audio good work,im happy for ya...but ifyour gonna call peopelthat took the time to peep your shit and comment,even thgouht they idnt have to,even though you didnt like the comments they gave,backpak rappers,who dont understand the game,then dun you badly mistaken,you seriousy need to up in my eyes,no offence,but you do,you nned ot work on vocab,maybe multies if you want...the flow needs work...you need alot of work,and if your gonna come aroun dtalkin like you know whats best,then why did you post in her ein the first place...if you rso into this game andunderstand how it works,go back to seelin mixtapesout the back o fyou rtruck an stop postin...dafuck.