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Old 05-18-03, 12:04 AM   #12
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young cell took this in my opinion he had some major ill shit in his battle

i spit flows to speck and dip, to slip when i be in the hood wit more cracks then chap lips//

you didnt even let me know about the flow you spit, fe-male dogs dont bark loud like you bitch//

you come threw my hood in a honda acord, then my heat stay to your back like y spinal cord//

you wanna see me dog, you check my streams, cause my flows stay fresh like oxy clean//

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young cell i really think that u prewrote that but it was still a good battle verse overall. u should improve in your multis and originality. i think that you wouldve ko'ed this guy. Good verse overall

whyte i dont know what that was

I couldn't spit wit chu even if we had a prenuptual aggreement/

damn horrible line

I was tested positive for lyrical cancer, your results came in false/
nothin but a hot mess!

He says he wants beef but hes a vegitarian/

the most original line in ya battle and its still played!

The message in your words are too thin for a meanin, it sounds like you swallowed em', spit em back and made em' balemic/

that was the hottest shit in ya battle

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i can tell that u posted that up quickie so that u wouldnt get a no show but c'mon man at least try a lil harder dont just post up bull shit. u were weak in all aspects except for vocabulary kid. u really need to practice ya rhyme.


breakdown
cells verse

flow-excellent
wordplay-excellent
multis-poor
metas-average
punches-good
disses-good
vocabulary-average

overall 7/10

thugwhyte

flow-poor
wordplay-poor
vocabulary-ecxellent-
multis-average
metas-excellent
punches-average
disses-excellent

overall 4/10

vote-young cel