This one had some really short lines. It was still very descriptive like the other one I read from you. Although I didn't really pick up on whats going on in it. All I got from it was a lot of pain. Looks like things went from bad to worse to death. I probably missed the meaning of it like I do a lot of poems, but what I did pick up I liked.

"Lonely world-
Segregation
Faint of heart
Bitter weep
Final step
Forever sleep
Welcome death-
Suffocation
Last stop
Eternal damnation"

That was the part that I liked the most out of it all. Good post from you.