not bad freestyle, gotta elevate but yo doin a good job so far, keep it up, widen range of hip hop n rap u listen to, like Atetrack define' said the best to listen to usually is the ones noone knows about, get a real feel to the creativity of other freestylists, keep spittin n widen vocabulary, keep it up n ull be much better soon enuf man! keep up good work.....
peace.