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Old 05-18-03, 01:35 PM   #10
DaGyrlRemarqabL
..A New Breed of Femcee..
 
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Ay Dime..
Let me just say, I havent seen you post too much in a while, but you have REALLY elevated n come a long way with your writing.
I was feelin this piece a lot, like Wolf said, its easy to relate to and u really captured the whole essence of what it is to miss and need someone.

>But i just close my eyes and re-enter my world try to visualise,
your cheeky grin or your soft blue eyes,
the feel of your seductive touch shivers down my spine,
sometimes feels so real it ends in cries

Really . Im proud of you. Shit was pretty nice. You've come a long way. Im lookin forward to see more from you. Stay up and keep droppin em! Peep my shit if you got time gyrl.
Pz n propz.
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