sup Phrantik. You always got nice writez.
This was a tight piece, powerful, mad imagery. Really captivating. Reminded me of a Romeo n Juliet type deal. My favorite line was:

>She knows I love her but ill make it clear
With whispery words written in her ear
To sing it to her, I won’t be there
But as she reads, my voice she’ll hear

^That was extremely nice. Really feelin it. Ive been a fan of yours for a while. Youre definately talented. Lookn forward to more from you. Stay up n keep blessin us. Pz