I wouldn't capitalize every work. It makes it bothersome to read.
It was a good piece for the most-part.
I have trouble feeling anything, however, when the poem is written in the third person because it feels very detached. You did a good job with the writing though and near the end of the poem I got less of that feeling.

Anyhow, good job. Rhyme Scheme was elementary but that's fine, eventually you'll start to seperate thoughts and ideas and break it up into stanza's.

Peace

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