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Old 05-18-03, 01:50 PM   #13
DaGyrlRemarqabL
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Life as a bird couldn't be worst than life as a human being/
The creatures cant carry guns so no Bird killer spreeing/
Seeing life in a different light where there seems to be no fight just flight/

I thought that was tight and creative how you drew the comparison between the bird and the human. Interesting topic and pretty well executed. He's right tho, the title didnt really fit with the content but still, it didnt take away from the poem itself. I thought it was tight, Stay up n keep postin.

Legendary, you give good, genuine replies. How come you cant never reply to me? heh.

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