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Old 05-18-03, 01:55 PM   #11
DaGyrlRemarqabL
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^You can always tell when an MC switches over to poetry for a minute. The multi's. NIce tho, gotta love the multis.
This is the first ive read from you Kassius, I thought it was really tight tho. Great imagery and emotion. My favorite line was:

>He Feels Dirty…The Lives He’s Taking Killed His Confidence.
At Age Thirty…He Finally Has Met His Greatest Enemy-His Conscience.

Lot of nice lines tho, Good symbolism, overall nice piece. Feelin it. Stay up with this n keep droppin em.
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