IP:
i dont write much poetry either..
but one tip for ALL of your writing
shorten your bars...it makes it
difficult to read when they are
all different...keep a syllable count
like 12 or 10 syllables. and it
should flow very nicely...then
you can get into internals and
multis with that...it will make you
a great writer..
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