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Kevin Brown
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Originally posted by Philo
it is difficult to say a lot in a little space...
you did quite well here.
to be picky, a couple questions. There is no explaination to why.
1. he loves her
2. hes killing himself
The poem does work very well on it's own...however I have trouble being sympathetic for the character because this all is unexplained...
But I did enjoy it, and i think it was good.
keep it up
Peace
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thats basically it.. the poem wasnt abotu him loving her or him killing himself.. it was about him writing for her... hence most of the focus there... but if your wondering what i was thinkin, he had aids and didnt want pity or the temptation or the chance that she could get it... thanks everyone...
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