as one good turn well deserves anotha rite back. i must say this is defintly sum good stuff. love how ya took a deep and close 2 heart subject and just florished it with the rite mix of emotions and imagery that ya blew me back in my steps foe a second. ya flow in ya first verse was rapid pace almost a tounge twister. well used, grabbing my attention untill the the mighty unveiling, where ya second verse just demands attention with a raw power just screaming to vent out. sum serios emotions coming out with an intent. but enought about this and that im just lettin ya know this was a joy to read so stAy up

peace

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