I'm giving this one to Black... Truest, your verse was nice but you tried too hard... wayyy too hard to do metaphors and punchlines...
when you have to explain your meta's & punches like this:
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i kill muthafuckas no remorse or feelings i report more stealings to the rap "police" about these "biters" than a orange does peeling//(report more biters than oranges peel)
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you're trying to hard...
I see some potential in you truest... keep battling and writting..
Can Both Of you drop a vote in my battle with BigNick... thanks
here's the link:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=47553