Like Diamond said, this one was different. I've never read one with this kind of concept. The flowers and all. It was really good. I enjoyed it.

"Flower 1:
The day we met
It was a Wednesday Morning
A day in September to be Precise
I felt meaningless
you saw me lonely , you talked to me
and with a smile you made me breathe"

This part I liked because the first time you meet that special someone is always remembered. And you wrote about it well. Expressed it with good words. I liked the last line how you said she made you breathe with a smile. It was good.

"Flower 5:
The day my reality came to an end
A short dark day in January, some 5 months since I met you
I havent seen you since yesterday, and never will in my living days.
I spent with you the entire day , we talked and laughed like everyday.

You left with your friends, I watched you leave
They asked you questions as if u were a celebrity
and you denied everything, including the way you felt for me
you stabbed me in the heart, you flushed away the memories.
And now my dear, you are dead to me...."

This part of it kind of shocked me. Early on in the poem everything seemed to be going great then came that twist to it. I didn't expect that at all.

This was definately a good piece. I felt it as I was reading it. Nice job.