I feel you on this one~ i had wrote somethin kinda this before..

>Tempted but foolishly I took a step back
Your smile was in my grasp
Your colone wiped my face as you passed<

i think that was my favorite part, cuz i could jus picture it~ like, damn he smell good! but yea, i liked it, it was raw, ill read more of ur drops, keep doin what you do~