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Old 05-20-03, 05:45 PM   #5
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This was a good writing. I should have read it sooner. It flowed real well and I liked the way it rhymed. The content was good too.

"I lived long enough to execute survivalist tactics, abandonment issues with the basics
Irony details the plastic handle, five-limb weapon extension, and reinforced Juxtaposition blade
Two-face, a portrait Charlie has already painted, a clean slate needs my blood to stain it
I keep the sun under my helmet and the moon on a belt clip, and Love’s picture in a distant promise"

That is what I liked the most out of it. Nice post.
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