mic check got this one in my opinion. I can say one thing punches were a tie but rthe truest crushed my man in multis and i gotta give u that cuz

fave lines

I’ll spare him his life for apparent -reasons- that even my –weak- shit [scares him]/

Cuz you beaten me is like a anorexic bitch keeping her [food in her stomach]/

kinda played but u know still hot

I’ve been [sworn too ill] but I [sworm you still] you with words to “murder” cuz my ass was [“born to kill”]/

i like the creativity in that and the structure real ill

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u keep on doin ya thing man looks like u bout to be 0-6 but u know just keep on practicin. Just get in the mirror and freestyle and eventually it'll make ya text a whole lot better. Read a lot more and when u have nothin to do just start takin words outta the dictionary and use em in a rhyme enhance ya vocab but u nice just keep elevatin.

mic check ill as usual always keepin the flow hot.

favorite lines

There's no chance of my "ankles and LEGS-DEVORCING", cause "de feetin' me" is like getting a blow job from the HEADLESS-HORSEMEN//

funny shit right there like the multis

Cause Truest like "porno vets" in "virgin roles", he's only "ACTING-TIGHT"//

if the rest of ya shit was wack this wouldve taken it im sorry.

The SICKEST-OF-ARTISTS, not into "stealing roles", but I'll "RIP-YOU-A-PART"-BITCH//
I'm not "feeling your flow", but I'll throw a "FIST-IN-YOUR-HEART-QUICK", get inside your soul and start DISSING-YOUR-HARDSHIPS//

real cretivity int hat flow i really enjoyed it

othercomments
in my opinion u r one of the best on rb. U wouldnt be the first choice for someone to battle up here. and honestly if u ask me besides the few cats(that u fit right in with) theres no competition up here for you. Good battle flow

Breakdown

multis-damn near tie but-mic check
punches-mic check
disses-tie
wordplay-tie
structure-mic check
flow-mic check
originality-mic check
metas-mic check
style-mic check

my vote mic check


great battle overall _1