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Old 05-20-03, 06:36 PM   #16
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u know they always say punches when battles. Well in this battle one had punches while the other wasnt feelin. Im a start off by sayin i wanna give this a tie but it would have to be an extremely ill battle for me to give it a tie.

so

favorite lines

This bitch is Murdered with this Verse "Period", speakin of which it's to remove this Bitches Tampon // 12

didnt really have good structure but a pretty good line overall

The only reason Tonya wins Battles, is cause she got an Army of dick riders//

ill line but it would make peeps think that u werent really tryin

Ill Rip-ya-Anatomy, You Cant Stand Up to Me, Cause Ill leave you Laid-Out// 8

my favorite in ya verse and its the only one that stood out to me

other comments
if u feel u not in the mood for a battle especially battlin a nubian(i think) goddess like tonya u should ask for extensions or post pone cuz she got a reputation for rippin niggas. i just think u need to try and stay focus nahmean.

breakdown

multis-excellent
punches-poor
disses-good
metas-good
wordplay-excellent
structure-good
flow-good
originality-average

overall-7/10

tonya baby tonya ! WHOOOOO

How you get One LOSS on your
RECORD you must've FIRED ya GHOSTWRITER//

ouch is all i got to say

You
have tha HARDEST Crew on RB when yall holding each other
DICKS-in-HAND/

damn thats an insult

I heard you call ya ASSHOLE "TENDER LOVE"
cause you like to "FORCE MD's"{More Dicks

that shit was plain dirty


got 7 wins and afta this Battle
you gonna bring me 8{Kobe}like the LAKERS//

i like the idea but it wasnt to original

you say I have dick riders naw I just RIDE DICKS//

that was my favorite line

other comments
girl u keep spittin and doin ya thing. U can hang witht he best of them. I can tell this wont ya best but that shit was still hot so it shows that you're unstoppable even on your worst day. Good flow

breakdown

multis-poor
metas-excellent
flow-good
structure-excellent
wordplay-excellent
punches-excellent
disses-excellent
originality-good

overall 8/10 so u won by a small margin but that coo.

good battle to both of ya'll