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Old 05-20-03, 08:26 PM   #6
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wolf's ryme;

if you could sneek a peek past you "fat stomach" you would see this is your "da feet"//

it took me a min to fig. out the connection, but once i got it i was like ohh shit. I liked that line. Nice flow and punches

TeckNeek's ryme;

fuck lyrical domination i come with literal demonstration
leave you wet like condensation from verbal meditation
cracked like pavement from attacks with each statement

these were sum nice lyrics, a nice lil intro. I liked that shit but the shit i didn't like was . .

dudes like 24 he's still trying ta define one rhyme
in one line i lay you on the floor like I did your dime

that line...ppl have been usin those words to ryme wit for a long time, i just thought it was too repetitive but good flow n lyrics none the less

The Break Down

Lyrics: Both
Flow: Teckneek
Metas: Wolf
Punches: Wolf

Winner/Vote = Wolf at the door