Nick this is a good poem..i mean i am not sure i am quite one to judge yet..but yours is good i sure hope mine are as good..t2yl love you..and yes keep trying to write poems the more you do it the easier it is i promise..i mean mine took me one day of coarse you can do it..and to everyone else who might have read those other two poems posted by whiterap19 those were by me he was just helping me out..but my thing is whitepoet19 so yeah..if i have nemore they will be by that name..thanks a lot..and nick good job!!