you are a god writer. This one and the last.
Your style is interesting... from what I've seen it is very personal... it is difficult for many people to write good personal poems. and I've seen two good ones from you.

You are able to pick things that should be said and word them properly. It comes across as though it is being read to me by someone although I read it myself.

Nice work.
Keep this shit up.

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