thanx for analizeing my poem and givering constructive feed back ! i feel that is positive and motivateing ! i use to be really intro poetry as a kid ! and that i was told that i had a natural talent in this ! i feel that i can build the knowledge that i am going to need to be able to express my self to my fullest extent peace

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