damn! shorten ya bars a lil bit! unless you gonna put multitudes of multies... long bars with only the last words rhyming are monotonous and wack... put more multis the longer the bar
quick-to-spit, rip-ya-shit, smoke-a-dick, aint-wortha-lick... stuff like that throughout the line... instead of AA/BB try sometihng different like...
A......A
A..A..B
B..B..B
^^^that... anyways thats my two cents