This was pretty good writing. Good words, flow, and all that. I got a little confused about it though.

Waiting for me to make my move, watching me watching her
Waiting for her to move at all so I can punish her
And beat her bloody body as her soul escapes free
How can she think I'm so cold, that aint reality

That's what got me confused. Is that how she sees you? But you're not really like that? Other than that part, which I didn't really understand, the rest of it was good.

"Because I'm my own man, I'm in love with her bliss
Not the kind of possesion, but with the kindest kiss
To show that I love her and I'll always treat her right
From the sun rising in the morning to it setting at night
And when darkness has fallen and the stars hang in the sky
I will look into her eyes and then I'll know why"

Those are the lines I liked the most. Good imagery. I liked this and hope you keep posting more up.