ermm...close this...butters wher eyou at...your on somewhere, delete the shit or something...no wodner your poor,spend all your time lookin at porn....why dont you leave a constructive critisicm,instead of freeposting,or maybe even just bad criticism,anythigns better then you posting pictures of some girl lookin mad stupid like that...someone ban this guy...


to the verse...im sorry your thread has been dirtied by this smut shit,but yeah,cant help it....some cats are stupid....the verse was eal simple,but you can elevate alot on it,over itm eyoull get better and shit,the rhymign was simple,the vocab needs a big uop,but keep writing and shi tan youll elevate dun...keep at it....

bismillah