Maybe if you were patient and let people read them, They wouldnt hate, instead of uppin yourself

I need to do whatever feels right.//
that's the real light, to not conceal emotions and shine bright.//
set my wheels in motion and find my niche.//
in line for food stamps, or lying in a ditch.//
if that's the path I choose, then that's it.//
but if I choose to be rich that's what I'll be.//
drop a bomb on this industry and be idolized like D-R-E.//

I liked it. Probably sound better on audio cause I've heard your stuff and you flow good on audio. Good flow..dont cry anymore