sand this piece you have done is max dopeness, plot was nice with good ending, some lines that were powerful -

his heart was like a rock but not solid only calloused

i mean look . i was the student . and my teachers kneels to me

Son BE QUIET like i said..it would be wise for you to stop to speak you will now reside as a slave in my land...to forever Rot In Peace...

lookin foward to seein more of your pieces.
peace out...