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Old 05-22-03, 04:47 AM   #3
Atetrack define'
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now that was aiight synopsist....was aiight....the first bverse however was nothign compared to the second i thought...the second was alot beter then the first....it was more eve,it flowed better,and the vocab was harder.....the first verse,was choppy but,it fell off a couple of times i thoguht....just coz of the bar length i couldn pick it up......itd be short hten long short then long nahmean...an yeah...all in all it was good,i liked th etitle...shock value...that was cool...and the punches in the second verse was nice...like assholes doing jail time,ima keep it tight...that shit was nice....
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