This was good. Had a nice flow to it. Good rhyming. Like Mentill said, the first lines got me into it. Those 2 were really good.

"i can see the light, but this maze refracts it into three laid
paths you must be having a laugh, feeling the third degree
god with his tongue in his cheek, seeks ahead laughing at me"

Those were the other lines I liked a lot out of it. I feel that way sometimes. Not much more that I can add to why this is good since most already hit on it. Good post.