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Old 05-22-03, 02:08 PM   #8
Atetrack define'
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n-demik is a girl???...with avoice liek that???that would scare a kindergardener im sorry...c-rayz is ill.....i have time for a goo dreply now haha...


k here we go...

everythign i said before...without the weeee...thing...i liked how toward the end you used alot of pausing,that was good,the,

motionless.. inclement.. contemptible
wounded.. ventricals.. part...that was good,and how it flowed intot he ending of th everse so nicely with th e1cm square based thing nahmena,shit was nice....my family tree was deciduos..being forsaken feeds the reasoning....damn you ,you smart ass....why you come up with such a nice line...pssshhh to you...:P..the senses if mahines iscillating like men what ill,thats a nice line to think over...with a shoe ont eh adjacent foot,im still a broken mosaic....DAMN!!!.....i hope cats actually read this nad understood what was going on,if they didnt they jsut fools...well they would be for not understanding...but they are still fools....i liked how you did present tense an edifice,i have trouble thinking o fshit like that to rhyme with,its difficult for me,but you did it nicely with that line,real clever...blank void,animate lonely...oooohhh......coz we leak when we hurt ache,.what can it be all for?....ahhhhh...i jsut wish i had gatewyas blueprint,before all time ceases to flow,sory if i ve got i wrong,but that was one of th ebest ending ive heard in a long time....shit had a meaning....this was a real nice peice dem,youd be kiddin your self not audioin it...if audioin is a word,if it isnt,it is now k?...shit was amazing.nothin more can be said...ill..
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