see i liked it all the way up to the guns an dbullets and fuck part,that was ill up to there,but apart from that,the rest i liked,hada kinda slow stop start sound to it,almost like ermmm,who is it,,,,shit...rayz walz...kinda thts nott the mc but someone similar nahmeannice vocab throughout it,had a kind of long bar small bar thign going,wich made it sounds rather choppy,bu it was still aiight...what do you mean by you goign dislecsic?i didnt understadn that...was bit funny....

i was taught to be a hood disciple

after thi sline th evocab seemed to drop,and th elfow fell off lightly,it still carried bu tit was a bit messy nahmean,all in a ll good verse,but just watch the choppyiness...

return th efavou rdun...



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