I personally liked it.. smaller lines gave it a nice flow.. it was a pretty basic rap, but as far as skill level goes you're up there, just a different style..

"bullets in the guns get ejected
with no exaggeration
same old story use imagination
this is for street glory and infatuation
not for your amusement or fascination
not for your abusement or congradulations....."

^ I liked those lines.. they went together well, .. ne-way.. holla

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